Lesson 4 Journal Entry #1

Evaluating Lesson 4 Essay
The supporting evidence in the revised claim "The Strength of Patience" is very convincing. One source's facts are convincing because she has the experience of practicing patience for a living. Her many years as a military wife and her work experience gives credibility to her statements. She uses patience in every aspect of her life. The other source's facts are also convincing because the source tells of "How To Be Patient" and gives pointers on using paitence for a living. These source also point out on the difficulty of utilizing this characteristic in a person's life.